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"Thank You"
  by Poohbabi2010


The sun sets
Upon the golden sand
We sit together
Hand in hand

We gently embrace
And look into each other's eyes
I wonder if you are
An angel in disguise

You hold me
Like there's no tomorrow
I suddenly forget
The past sorrow

I kiss your soft lips
And you kiss mine
I never knew
Loving someone could be this fine

You pick me up
And carry me to our room
Oh how a love can blossom
And a heart can bloom.

Your touch is so gentle
But your hands so strong
How could a love like this
Ever go wrong?

My heart is beating
200 times a minute
Because my love
You are in it

The sound of your heartbeat
All through the night
We fall asleep in each other's arms
And wake to the morning light.

I look into your eyes
And this is when
I say "Thank You"
For teaching me to love again.
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Date Submitted: Dec 29, 2008 (01:24 PM)
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  Tee Tyme
04/12/09 (05:10 PM) 
Young love....soo beautiful...sweet poem...luv it!

  rockstar
12/29/08 (05:20 PM) 
yo this poem was sooooooooooo sweet and you really put your heart in this keep it up ma 10 starz all day

  hiswife0926
12/29/08 (02:11 PM) 
well done.. i know the feeling...10***

  Sie7e
12/29/08 (02:01 PM) 
hell yeah im a sucker for love too. This had that heartfelt passion, that everyone infatuates and dreams of. Which made it such a pleasure to read, aside from that I have nothing bad to say. I like the descriptiveness of how you felt. I think you could stretch this piece even further with some more writing about how the scenario felt.

  Dan Freeman
12/29/08 (01:51 PM) 
nice...i think you should do another version in a non controlled meter.

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