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"The 4th Chamber"
  by B. Rose


She completes me
I realized instantly
After our lips meet poetically
With fireworks in the backdrop
Reacting off the melody
Off our lip locking escapades of this ecstacy...

Thats only accomplished
When yor voice and smile are near me...

It's clearly

L
O
v
E

Cause only that has the power
To changed your diluted version of what love should be

In your eyes...

And bring someone special enough
To assist in you thinking clearly...

With you I am completely incomplete

It's like...

Numb feelings
Emotionless heartbeats

Basically...

Only creating an oxymoronic mentality...

You're a Wiz to me
And without you the numbers chambers I obtain is 3...

I could survive without you
And without you
Is a place I don't desire to be...

Your love is the most magnificient flavor
I want to be that breath of air
That you release each time your mouth opens
So I could always be there
You are more the fair...

You are the 4th chamber to my heart...

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Date Submitted: Oct 17, 2009 (12:05 AM)
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  tanquilla
11/15/09 (10:39 AM) 
how do you do that? damn...i think i've fallin love *with his poetry*...*dies w/o 4th chamber...great write..much love..god bless..peace.. ♥ tQ

  Monae'
11/14/09 (01:43 AM) 
I like this! Especially the use of oxymorons "completely incomplete". It always spices up a poem! Very well done and good word choice!

  Cryssy-Rashad
11/08/09 (01:47 AM) 
awe this is tooo sweet...like wedding vows type sweet...I like this piece Rose!

  Μz Ρ...
11/07/09 (08:41 PM) 
this is just so sweet & touching! ..xxxlucky you xx

  Da Darkest Ari...
11/07/09 (06:19 PM) 
Aw man i'm feelin this ....lol real LOVING .-- That's some deep love brotha

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