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"The Answer: Ask Yourself"
  by THE REALIST POET
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Ask Yourself by THE REALIST POET


Yes baby, i do admit i cheated! I even lied but my right doings should not go undefeated, Baby i know i was wrong and nothing hurts the soul more, then the man you love stepping out on you, but using this front door. Every night my stories switch up, as i play both of guys off of my hours at work, coming in late disguising myself as if im not doing anything wrong, lying through my teeth and i know this much it hurts, truth is when i lay there beside that girl i know it wrong, as a tear drop and my heart pounds i visual you laying in my arms, i know im a dog, a cheater, and a liar, but im your man of six years i cant believe that you say you are tired, i gave you my all, check after check, trips on vacation to the Bahamas and even in the Carribeans where we shared passionate sex, love is a default as the true colors are brought to surface, my face hurt from tears and hands begins to jerking, swinging as the palm of your hand touches the center of my jaw. Knocking my face to the side as spit is flown, all i can say is that baby im sorry and i never meant to hurt, but i have! You asked a question to yourself what should you do since i have cheated! Well, answer this what should i do now that i REGRET IT?
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Date Submitted: May 20, 2008 (09:47 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 05/21/08 (12:53 AM)
Author: Capricorn Sweetness
Poem Title: Your Question: My An...

Date: 05/20/08 (11:47 PM)
Author: THE REALIST POET
Poem Title: Living With my Mistake

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  Cappaccino
05/20/08 (11:36 PM) 
DiS CrAzY!!! AdMiTiinG it Is PoweRful. THe WhIrpOOl oF EmoTIons FelT> WIll U liVe wit Ur MistAke??

  Cedez
05/20/08 (10:10 PM) 
i like this poem alot. 10 starz

  Nubian
05/20/08 (10:04 PM) 
DAMN.ITS HOT!!!! 10 STARS..REAL EMOTIONS

  ASympl3Diamond
05/20/08 (10:00 PM) 
females are very complicated! u cant do her wrong ask for forgiveness yet make it about u by sayin wat should u do. ya fucked up yea, but afta dat it all plays on her word and her emotions, wat she feels and wat she plans on doin about the situation

  MZ.Philosophy
05/20/08 (09:59 PM) 
aww damn i like this yo what should you do?????????good write

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