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"the architect blueprints"
  by after vision


i done been
a many places
i done seen
a many faces

been around
the world
smelt the nature
of foriegn girls

had bullets
with my name on it
had habits
that i thought i could never quit

stood with both feet
on a presidents grave
peeped out of the same hiding spots
of the run away slaves

heard the silence
of Check Piont Charlie - the Berlin Wall
came back later
to witness that wall fall

been the first on the scene
only to watch --- the last breath
and at the request of a friend -- i kept company
until replaced by the angel of death

i knocked on the door
in military dress uniform
to tell a single mother
that her baby didn't survive the storm

i knocked doors open
after my knocks went unanswered
done poured death inside
chased that ghost high -- knowlingly impaired

caught hearts -- broke hearts
in a effort to ease my pain
told love to wait for me -- while i ran
escaped in silence -- i even believed that i caught satans train

now i stand -- broken
ready to piece me back together again
wondering how i can take myself
to a place -- that i have never been

after vision
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Date Submitted: Oct 27, 2009 (12:54 PM)
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  BlessedOne
10/28/09 (06:44 PM) 
I really enjoyed this piece. It was like a solitary time-line wrapped inside a song. We all need someone else sometimes.

  no shit.itsana...
10/28/09 (02:30 PM) 
this is something else, man. The places experience takes us are various and strange. Wishing for a new horizon. This life seems very full and courageous.

  geel
10/27/09 (04:37 PM) 
brilliant...embrace u again...in fullest...don't allow the past to dictate ur future relationship...wiith u...what i so treasure and respect about ur writes is that u are so open and vunerable...and yet such strenght is apparent in who u are as a man...u so freely express ur hurt...your desires...you wants...ur dreams...even loneliness...for the world to see...that is what makes this man special and unique...

  Tonya
10/27/09 (02:34 PM) 
redlovesong said my words exactly...maybe its time to let someone else be that perrson for you

  *Miss Toya*
10/27/09 (01:31 PM) 
now that last stanza spoke volumes...you have def. been through a lot and done some things that not many could or would want to do...

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