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"The Beautiful One's"
  by Tha Scorpion


YOU, you engulf me, you're in every breath I take
I hope giving all my love to you is not a fatal mistake

For my heart is really gentle, and when I love, I love hard
So I'm a little apprehensive to truly let down my guard

I admit I've had a broken heart, some days I think it's still in recovery
This beautiful angel who I also gave my heart to, and who I thought was lovin' me

Then she just up and left me, she didn't even come and tell me good bye
It was the first time in my entire life I knew what it meant for a grown man to cry

I constantly told her she was my beauty, my heart, whom I loved above all others
I guess my love wasn't good enuff cause she still sought love from different brothas

Here I was thinkin' I'd found a soulmate, but it seems she just wanted a sucker
Someone to look good on her arm in daytime, and a night someone just to fuck her

Anyways, that's old news now huh? Ya wondering what's it got to do with you?
See I'm concerned in our matters of love baby, because you're a beautiful one too

Can you love me with all of your heart? Or am I just a momentary fill?
Am I a substitute lover in your life or are we trying to build something real?

I'm kinda leary on dealing with you honestly, you hear you're pretty everyday
So I wonder how long it will be, before a man with more than me takes you away

Everybody's always lookin for an upgrade, to see if what really glitters is gold
So I'm cautious about you beautiful one's at least that's what I've been told

So I'mma open up to my vulnerability and put my heart on the line
Knowin' in most cases it's the beautiful one's that hurt you every time



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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (3)
Date: 11/19/08 (04:16 PM)
Author: TARRIE
Poem Title: "You're Beautiful Too!"

Date: 04/24/08 (10:06 PM)
Author: curiously-cute
Poem Title: beautiful one's get ...

Date: 06/26/07 (11:48 AM)
Author: shaybaby69
Poem Title: beautiful who?

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comment icon  COMMENTS (203)
  TARRIE
11/19/08 (04:04 PM) 
Man, this is awesome....well written and you can tell it's from your heart...Big Ups!

  Miss Self Suff...
11/17/08 (01:50 PM) 
100%...great! i wish i can give you more stars.. i loved this.. 10*s sweetie

  ButterflyDream
11/13/08 (11:33 PM) 
This was so emotionally heartfelt....a truly raw write.Loved it,wonderful job:)

  lyric1985
11/13/08 (06:53 PM) 
~ got me speechless babe....~ lyric

  blaque
11/07/08 (05:33 PM) 
it always good to know that beauty is in the eye of the beholder and when you find someone with true beauty and a genuine love is shared...there is no upgrading...great write

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