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"the box"
  by Nestled1


Society paints this big picture
of what everyone should be
so i stepped into this picture box
and now i was part of society

my clothes and my hair were my pride and joy
and my values were all wrong
then i got pregnant with my baby boy
and his wardrobe was just as strong

I had "super star" style
pregnant livin in the slum
a lot of bullshit just compiled
i lost my boy and my soul went numb

society's vanity filled my eyes
and began to swallow my morals
I spent six hundred dollars in july
just to put heels on my new Jordans

i was addicted to societys picture
like so many to societys coke
i continuously fed my addiction
until at last it rendered me broke

I lost my job, my soul, and my home
and all just for an image
my heart, my mind, and my spirit
were competing in this reality scrimmage

I felt in this world alone
and i was sick of being vain
i sold or pawned everything i owned
and wiped away most of the pain

I look around my empty life
and took in the emptiness
i trudged my bags and swallowed my pride
and i told myself "no regrets"

i took a break, lit a cigarette
then cut my hair to my natural locks
i am once again as real as i get
beacause i stepped back out of the box
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Date Submitted: Feb 25, 2007 (06:59 PM)
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  Rissa14
11/03/07 (10:26 AM) 
wow, this is deep. simply beautiful how you stepped up to be who you really are. and you got there some way, some how, cause thats the way it should be. even though you might not have liked some things that you did in the past or happened in the past...decisions you made or anything, it all just matters now when you got wehre you think you should be. juss bein you, and doin wateva you gotta do to stay that way. its great and wonderful that you have pride. amazing how you could step up. wow...gre...
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  GHOST718
11/03/07 (09:46 AM) 
WE NEED MORE PEOPLE TO STEP OUT OF THE BOX TO REALIZE THAT SOCIETY HAS GIVEN US AN IMAGE TO FOLOOW AND THAT'S ALL THAT WE'RE DOING LIVING UP TO A STEREOTYPE SPREAD THE WORD MA

  BIG TEXAS
10/19/07 (02:16 PM) 
pretty deep

  lilmama6162000
09/27/07 (11:00 AM) 
DAMNNN mami thats shit was hot keep it up

  fr3$h P
09/24/07 (10:57 AM) 
aaahhhh hella deeeeeep shawty. see u talkin bout me in dis shit. cuz i'm all bout clothes, n worryin bout wat type jordans i got on ma feet, i guess i'm in society's picture box. lol now u make me feel shitty cuz now i know dat box ain't really dat good lol. did u really lose ur son tho? cuz datz some sad shit shawty. good ass poem though i enjoyed readin dis shit, u show da hell waasn't liein wen u said i'd like it. 10 stars shawty, i like i like i like i like

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