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"THE BREAK OF DAWN"
  by poeticfrost


Dearest Lord,
why does it seem
that i gotta break
be desperate
before i come to u
your body was broken for me
why do i deny u?
am i just anotha judas to u??
my sincerest apologies way past due
i should be broken
daily, willingly
for u
not jis er' now & then
when i need somethin'
finally realize i'm lost without u
so, why is it that at that moment
right when i asked u in
i got all of you
but it's taking me so long
to really receive u??
why don't i reciprocate
the love you constantly
bestow on me??
keep wonderin why i don't feel u
close to me
when the whole time
the one who's walking away
is me...
break me
crush dawn wholly
until only your face
can been seen
i pray all this in your name,
AMEN!!
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Date Submitted: May 07, 2007 (05:16 AM)
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Date: 10/15/07 (01:47 AM)
Author: Pollyanna
Poem Title: Coffee's on

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10/15/07 (03:19 AM) 
this was a beautiful joint here... beautiful prayer.. i feel like a judas sometimes.. like im betrayin the Lord.. but then i realize im not perfect... and He forgives me for all my wrongdoings..which is a blessing

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