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"The Break-Up Letter"
  by Sigmatic


In my locker, I found a letter.
It was from my girl, it read she no longer wanted to be together.
She wrote we needed some time apart,
but I'll always have a special place in her heart.
All our love, thrown away in just seven paragraphs.
All I could do was watch her travel a new path.
We been together for so long.
Breaking up now seems so wrong.
In the letter she surrendered her love.
So I freed her like a caged dove.
I lost more than a lover, I lost a best friend.
I thought we would be together until the very end.
She said we shared destiny.
She always bought out the best in me.
From her I expected better,
but true color shines in a break-up letter
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Date Submitted: Mar 22, 2007 (04:08 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 05/04/08 (07:43 PM)
Author: dei
Poem Title: behind the love letter

Date: 06/15/07 (01:26 PM)
Author: ghetteo princess
Poem Title: we can no longer be ...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (63)
  touchdapearl2
08/25/08 (11:25 PM) 
wow well be glad she even thought to write a letter that showed she felt bad about the break-up,but she wanted to explore,this was a relatable write

  *Miss Toya*
08/05/08 (10:48 AM) 
this piece saddened me...i would hate to be broken up with in a letter and with the way you expressed how she made you feel...*sighs* i remember feeling this way about an ex of mine...

  A.C.H.
07/21/08 (02:59 PM) 
Man, I am feeling this piece! Somes times it is just like that. You can tell she cared though although it was a cold way to break up. You poet genius shines trough. Keep doing your thing dog!

  Journey B
07/14/08 (04:18 PM) 
Damn dats wats up i feel u daddy... Dat was deep and i been broke up with in a letter. The teenage love affairs never last do they

  krazy
06/19/08 (08:54 PM) 
wow this was real shit every one can relate to this and thats a good thing just keep up the good work ok

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