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".The Butterfly & The Elephant."
  by ...Da Fort...


..To My Mari..Thanx For Letting Me Love On You...*Grins*


Mutual deep thoughts
Journeys expeditions took
Suitable insights

Enjoy company
Butterfly --the elephant
Free intelligence

Patio quiet
Star staring with much intent
Holding hands time spent

Loving moments so
Growing old secure –endure
Pure togetherness

Cherishing seconds
Butterfly-the elephant
A toast to us--cheers


..not too long to wait..

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Date Submitted: Apr 21, 2008 (12:37 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Mz Prose
05/02/08 (12:48 AM) 
so sweettttt awwwwwwww <3

  ataraxia
04/27/08 (04:58 PM) 
AGH! Visuals, image choice, wording, fit, fit, fit, fit. Finely fashioned...this. ata

  **HOLLA**
04/24/08 (01:54 PM) 
HHHMMM??? Does this suggest wedding bells and rice throwing that I knew nothing about??? AAAWWWWW, please tell me that's what this suggests... ??? This is exactly as Mariposa said, simple yet extremely expressive, what I would do for a love like this, pure togetherness, das was sup... loved the vibe in this and now I walk away all sad and jealous and shit, thanks fort & mari shhheeeeezzzzz.... LOL *wink*

  11th Wonduh
04/21/08 (10:47 PM) 
beautiful words, and i gotta agree w/ scorp here. good to see love shine as well

  *Tha Scorpion*
04/21/08 (05:01 PM) 
I coulndn't be more happier for you guys, I'm so glad amongst the hate that get's spread on here, it's good to see love get a turn at bat as well.

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