Someone said my work was "Cool."
Someone said my work was "Nice."
Someone said I wrote a "Good One."
And to those,
I give advice...

If it moves you,
tell me WHY,
Critic my work,
Or just pass.

If you can't wrap your mind around it,
Please.
Don't blow smoke up my ass.

I share my work on this website,
Not for "kudos",
But to relate,
To touch someone,
Get criticism,
To become BETTER,
To become GREAT...

So if you HATE it,
Tell me WHY...
If you LOVED it,
Tell me WHY...
You can't relate?
Then just BE REAL,
And if not?
Then don't reply...