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"The Dance Of A Lifetime"
  by PoisonPoetry


Written 12/27/2008 @ 12pm


She takes his hand, as she takes a deep breath of air
He pulls her close, takes a step, slowly brushing her hair

Round and Round on the floor she goes
Where her feet will stop, no one knows

Her heart is as pure of the cold winter night
And her feet are so graceful as she dances out of sight

He holds her close, and whispers his dreams
Of beautiful places and love unseen

Spinning and twirling faster they seem
Her eyes glisten so bright from the light beam

They are lost in the embrace of each other’s arms once more
Everyone around them fades into the darkness of the dance floor

He sweeps her outside underneath the night’s ambient glow
Never adverting his gaze from her eyes or her lips below

The rain starts drizzling down their faces, as she removes her mask
Will this dance ever end is the question neither dares to ask.

He lifts her high as she kisses him softly and slowly
I think I love you they whisper in each others ears knowingly

The music slowly fades into the dissipating night breeze
As he takes her hand and slowly falls down to his knee

Her beauty was uncanny and he knew it to be
Forever remembering this night, he set her free…



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Date Submitted: Dec 27, 2008 (04:06 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 02/16/09 (09:33 PM)
Author: mingmei
Poem Title: Free Style

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comment icon  COMMENTS (19)
  Remy82
08/14/09 (06:30 PM) 
GIIIRRLLL That needs to be in a dern book! That was good. I could just imagine the scene.Great write!

  monica
07/25/09 (11:44 PM) 
this was such a beautiful poem i love it so much imma have to add it to ma favorites

  Traxler
06/21/09 (01:41 AM) 
It was really good! your rhming was consistant and the story was beautifully told

  touchdapearl2
06/19/09 (02:58 AM) 
I love how you ended this write tho it was fairy talish.....it was truly heartfelt!

  PoeticStarChil...
05/20/09 (10:25 PM) 
Very beautiful. Just like the above comment, it reminds me of cindarella. People don't value the romantic gesture of a dance anymore but it is very beautiful. Nice write!

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