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"The Death of She..."
  by *Jazique*


Tear drops stain the pages as she writes
This time she’s given into the fight
Her goals & dreams are far out of sight
She sits shattered because things just don’t feel right

Heart starting to shrink
Hope is becoming weak
Knife lies in her right hand
She feels like no one understands…

Blade penetrating her wrist
Right now she no longer wants to exist……

Slowly she slits her wrist….

Slit
…Slit
…....Slit

……Drip
...Drip
Drip
.
.
.
The pain she feels like she deserves
For she’s slowly killing her nerves
Soon she won’t be able to feel at all

Blood now falling among the ground
It’s late within the night, so she barely hears a sound
All she can hear is the pound
…..of her heart against her chest

Thump…
…Thump
Thump…

All she can hear is the ticking of a clock
Tick..
...Tock
Tick...
She knows that her time is running out....

Slowly her heart is starting to give away
No more words left for her to say….

Time of Death: 3:15am November 3rd, 2009

This Will Be The Death of She
...Suicide

Suicide
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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2009 (03:18 PM)
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  คว...
11/18/09 (09:49 AM) 
wow, dark ink....your words put you there with her...watching what she is doing...sad how lonliness can drive a person to just give up, but when you feel no onee cares or understands you start to ? what is the point in your existance....

  Successful
11/18/09 (06:41 AM) 
yoo i loved that picture roxie use that picture in her poem before i loved tha wordplay babes you have a very loving pen there keep it up o yeah lil mama im bab\ck i havin seeen you to let you no that tho but im back

  stranger
11/17/09 (09:25 PM) 
All people need to be loved , but love can only be given ... the simplest human truth then , that we deny ourselves a joyous life by not giving to the need of others so that they are freed from the false ideas of this world to freely love too, so there is enough love to go around, and all can live as one in peace and equality, valuing each other... not this ...why are humans so stupid that they cannot see this simple truth and live in peace and plenty this world can provide ??? This is beauti...
[+]more

  geel
11/16/09 (01:40 AM) 
brilliant...wirite...such pain creates such disaster...such numness that we search for the quickess way to releave us of this pain...oh my...

  ON!X
11/08/09 (03:42 PM) 
The image at the end is a very effective element. And the entire piece is powerful altogether. The words are direct and revealing to a serious, dramatic place to the reader. It makes the reader quesion his/her ability to help someone in desperation, so it's reflective of one's self.

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