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"The Defintion of a Man"
  by Crystal H.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem (( Oh-My! The True Shape Of A Woman )) By Swakay3Thousand by Group: BLACKSTAR POETS


A walking mold of simplistic imperfections
Strength, pride, courage.. What they see as a reflection
Are able to provide the greatest extent of affection
Long as they feel a connection...thus fighting the urgency of an erection

A symbolism of endless protection
Unwilling to admit wrongs but will make correction
His greatest hurt will come from rejection
His favorite part of a newspaper is the sport section

Does not matter if he’s a lawyer or in the field of garbage collection
Money never makes the man but yet that’s often a subjection
Minimizes sleeping around thusly avoiding the risk of infection
Wrong decisions equal incarceration in houses of correction

Makes no excuses for the choices he's made
Must pays child's support for the women he never cared for but laid
Cares for his appearance, often picks up a razor blade
When he feels disrespected he can blow up like a grenade

Feels like they're the main person who should provide
Walks with their head high in a casual stride
Should never have the intentions of only getting inside
Truly all have the same best friend who goes by the name of Pride

He is the creator of his destination
His obstacles in life are temptation and infatuation
Although that can easily be overcome by lotion and masturbation
His flaws revolve around lack of realization

If things don't go their way they'll have a short attention span
Prefers to always have the upper hand
Will try to solve his own problems even if he does not understand
No offense to the fellas but this is my definition of a man

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Date Submitted: Apr 22, 2009 (03:17 PM)
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  love-is-the-li...
09/02/09 (12:08 PM) 
wow this is nice, it hit me up alot, ur flows was out layable, which means it was hot...so its a 10*s from me

  phire fly
05/01/09 (12:40 PM) 
very very nice write...you hit a homerun

  Dnasty
05/01/09 (12:21 PM) 
i wish some of the women i dated were like you I like this poem

  Swakay3Thousan...
04/24/09 (02:47 PM) 
I had to do a double take :). A grand flow. 3000 ★ 's [BleevitT]

  Swakay3Thousan...
04/24/09 (02:41 PM) 
OH MY! :) Marvelous write, great incentive in understanding. I must I am blessed to view this work love. Amen! 3000★'s [BleevitT]

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