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"The Depth of our Love"
  by .Mase Da Rula.



Poets Note
this is a collaboration I did on facebook with a beautiful bilingual writer her name is Vivian...
and I wanted to share with the folks of GS so please enjoy

The Depth of Our Love

as my eyes gaze past eternity
seeing wonders so sublime
I praised the day
like the Sabbath
when you became mine

manifested over time
like grapes into wine
I ingested you into my life
being subdued
by your mind

entranced
as my feelings advance
you enhanced the chance
by a simple flutter of your eye
as you glanced

deep into my soul
you take a hold
never knew that emotions
this intense could as ever
be as bold

as the love here unfolds
...tell me...
how deep is your love for me?
is it as powerful
as my mind does dream?

sitting here waiting
for you to explain
your reality

and she answers:

La verdad mi amor?
Es que tu lo eres todo para mi
Me Hechizas con tus palabras
Haces que se enciendan estrellas en mi

Tu eres mi aire, Misentido de vivir
Solo Vivo Para sentirte en mi
Tus besos me embriagan
Tus Caricias me calman

Mi Amor ven a mi
Que yo sere tu unico existir
Mi vida quedate aqui
Que sin ti yo no puedo seguir

Esa es mi realidad Cariño
Asi de profundo es mi amor por ti Papi
Tienes alguna duda?
Ven te lo aclarare en nuestro Cielo.

En un eterno existir
Donde nunca podras moirir
Porque mi amor yo sere tu elexir
Yo sere tu eterno fuente de amor

(translation)

The truth my love?
Is that you are my everything
You bewitch me with your words
And you make stars shine within me

You are my will to live
I live to feel you in me
I become drunk by your kisses
I become calm when you caress me

Come to me my love
That I will be your only existence
My life stay here with me
Cause I can't go on without you

That is my reality Honey
This is how deep my love is for you baby
Do you have any doubts?
Come I will make it clear in our heaven

In the existence of eternity
Where you shall never die
Because my love for you is your elixir
I will be your fountain of eternal love.

Copyright ©2009
.Mase Da Rula. & Vivian Rodriguez

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Date Submitted: Aug 04, 2009 (11:41 AM)
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  *Jazique*
08/08/09 (08:51 PM) 
this is a nice collab, I can feel the sincerity of the emotions within each word and stanza... I love the feel I get from this write, it's great! And I love that it's in both English and Spanish

  big josh
08/07/09 (12:20 PM) 
this was a very nice callabo you two did, nice job man

  AKYBSANE1
08/05/09 (01:53 PM) 
everyone wishes they had love like that..sum are lucky enuf to have it and its beautiful that u shared wt us...

  Angel
08/04/09 (09:03 PM) 
Very nice combination.. I'm still tripping over that Facebook collaboration bit.. I just use the internet... anything else, I'm like a blind girl walking.. no dog.. no cane.. nice one, brother.. (and sister..)

  cybersamm
08/04/09 (04:34 PM) 
surely this is love..xxxxxhow beautiful heaven manifests in these here wrds.well they do for me.

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