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"The Diamond or Me?"
  by deja`vu


If you had to pick,
between a diamond and me,
which would it be?
The beautiful diamond which is the hardest of any substance,
the diamond is which will soon one day give out,
the diamond in which doesnt have emotion or even any doubt,

or would you pick me,
a girl who can feel and love on you,
who will take joy in anything you do,
the girl with kisses that will drive you insane,
the one who will have you screamin her name,

I know we both are very beautiful,
and we can both be held in different ways,
but I would make you extremely happy throughtout our days,

Hopefully you don't have to think too hard,
for the answer to this is the simplest to make,
and I pray you don't make the stupidest mistake,

so I ask you again,
and please answer this truthfully,
If you had to pick between a Diamond and Me which one would it be?
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Date Submitted: Dec 28, 2007 (08:26 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 01/04/08 (12:27 PM)
Author: Tab Tab
Poem Title: The Diamond AND You

Date: 12/28/07 (09:05 PM)
Author: AC3of$PAD3$
Poem Title: The Real Diamond

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comment icon  COMMENTS (43)
  Diemenz
04/16/08 (06:54 PM) 
u defiantly get love for this great work..

  T Shyne
04/16/08 (06:00 PM) 
i like dis..flow was good..emotion was definitely there..good write ma 10 stars

  ~L!L~J0Y~
04/16/08 (05:56 PM) 
i like this one, emotion and flow is fresh and just on point....10 starz and a it'a fav, keep it up!

  B.Sanders
01/31/08 (02:46 PM) 
you keep doin you i love your poems theyre worth the time spent reading

  TB
01/03/08 (11:27 PM) 
you chica lol great poem im felin way to heres a 10

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