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"The End"
  by Tru'eace


Innocence is gone, for it has left like the virginity of a rape girl
One incident of betrayal caused fear and wrath to enter the calm heart
A king of explanation and maybe an author manipulation
Is now faced with a pure chance of true change
Taking every lesson learned and applying to the future days
Even with eyes on the outside all is seen is self
Selfish like the sun, that shines so bright that all can see
And only understand the pain of his long suffering
Wishing patience to become a new friend
Now believing that pain can be shared in two souls
Since recent truths have prove otherwise
Wishing on stars to get back what was once lost
Wrapping the heart,
Cutting the rage
Closing eyes,
Shutting the mouth
And finally just waiting
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Date Submitted: Dec 01, 2007 (07:19 PM)
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  .Candice.(Roll...
01/07/08 (11:00 PM) 
wow... this made me fall back and think for a second.. this was a write I was not even read for.. good one dear.

  Nikiie
01/01/08 (04:27 AM) 
I think that I read this one before. I cannot judge or remember. Still it was a real good piece, especially "wishing on stars to get back what was once lost, wrapping the heart, cutiing the rage, closing the eyes, shutting the mouth, and finally just waiting.: I've done that, the shutting of the mouth, not so much though

  11th Wonduh
12/15/07 (02:19 PM) 
had to take a step back and reread this to grasp it's meaning, on an abstract level this piece isn't bad, as i read this i was continuing to look for what may have caused the break up, separation, etc.

  BIG CHIEF
12/08/07 (07:37 PM) 
this is a great poem man..keep that pen moving my brotha..peace and hair grease

  2Smoove
12/08/07 (10:41 AM) 
deep......feelin this one

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