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"The End Of Love"
  by Magic✯


Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7 syllables






Thought your love was real
I feel like a fool… so blind
Now, I see the truth

Jus another illusion
Itz time to move on... goodbye!



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Date Submitted: Oct 28, 2009 (12:02 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 10/28/09 (07:30 AM)
Author: ♥MisSexy♥
Poem Title: It Was Real

Date: 10/28/09 (12:12 AM)
Author: Isa_bear
Poem Title: A New sight

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comment icon  COMMENTS (23)
  Chelz or Wet
11/22/09 (04:26 AM) 
agreed, short , simple ... but direct. great piece, and great choice to say goodbye to love when it is needed!

  1Heart4JC
11/15/09 (06:51 PM) 
I had been there a long time ago! PTL for it is over for this chapter to close for a new chapter opens the new one! This is so KISSy to kiss away: Keep It Simple & Sweet : )

  June-Bug
11/13/09 (12:47 AM) 
short, simple, and sweet. nice

  Lyrical Dragon
11/10/09 (07:56 PM) 
nicely put. time to move on. don't be a sucka haha ... nice write

  Lady_Style
11/07/09 (12:23 PM) 
Ouch!...this was heartbreakin to jus read...simply put yet painful...i love your ink that hurts..always bumps me into reality LOL...nicely penned hun xxx

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