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"The Epic Struggle"
  by PoeticSoulja
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Its A SHAME! by bumpy


One - Metallica

Beneath the glamorous facade lies tarnished art
The notable poems are subjected obscurity
Poetry bent on inflicting pain is spawned
As marvelous poets await for the picturesque dawn

Alas, we are incapable of escaping the lingering dusk
Animosity successfully causes once pure hearts to lust
Unknowingly exemplifying what genuine poetry resents
Behold as fury continues to fuel their formidable relent

The true poets on inhabit this website seek a reformation
Unfortunately, we wage a war against irrational opponents
Left wondering what will ultimately become of this site
Since it is being overwhelmed by poets who are beckoned by spite

The hearts of many GS poets disdain this aggression
Let us unite to bring forth more golden self expression
You can either act now before GS Poetry ceases to exist
Or witness helplessly as it plummets into the depths of abyss





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Date Submitted: Dec 10, 2008 (11:46 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (8)
  ToCute4U
03/31/09 (01:45 AM) 
this is very good cutie

  Charly Baltimo...
02/18/09 (10:36 PM) 
Profound piece! You really dug into it the battle of poetry. Loved this. The flow was crazy and the word choice was perfect! Please keep that good-good coming! 10starz no doubt!..

  Kirby
02/15/09 (11:06 PM) 
I love this poem.....its concept is true and your delievery was remarkable......great write

  *Lady~Ink*
02/04/09 (07:51 AM) 
wow your flow is tha illiest. I enjoyed reading this piece. very nice background too. much love. 10s

  Isis sun
12/12/08 (01:01 PM) 
PS, I wouldn't have expected anything but the best out of you. And you truly outdid yourself on this one. Truly beautiful work of art..

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