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"The Favorite"
  by cado astrum


I must be something awful,
For you to look at me that way,
Your face flushed as the sun,
Your teeth firmly nashed,
Imagining my head between them,
Your eyes wild with anger and disgust,
Despise me, you truly must.

I must be some kind of fiend,
An evil wretch, a bad seed,
For I see your body language,
Dark as night,
A tight knuckle white fist clenched,
Shoulders with potential violent energy tensed,
Your body is ready for a physical attack,
Perhaps it’s just a visual aid,
For your verbal bash.

Your words intrude me,
Like a bullet to the head,
Detest me?
HA!
You must wish me dead.
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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2007 (07:43 PM)
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  WarmNillaSuga
05/11/08 (01:53 PM) 
This....is like u tore a page from my heart. I don't know what or WHO made you write this, but it takes me back to when I was a teenager...THIS is some raw truth here and I thakn you for sharing your emotions so openly. 10s....*snapping fingers*

  11th Wonduh
10/03/07 (02:01 PM) 
true deep anathema, it's unfortunate that some folks feel that way. so much pure emotion.

  Bud Edward
10/02/07 (08:12 PM) 
This one really... has a strong impact on me. For reasons I know you understand. It's disturbingly real with it's emotion and the imagery is almost too vivid. It rattles me a little bit to think of how you felt when you first wrote this long ago. It's a feeling I understand,.

  Scriptixz
10/02/07 (06:16 AM) 
HAH! i just had to laugh at that closing stanza...the cynicism in it was oozing! :p i've known this feeling one too many times...it is indeed a shield if not sanity! this was pure wit! loved it!

  cado astrum
10/01/07 (07:44 PM) 
Probably written between 1996-1997.

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