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"The Fear (AIDS)"
  by bumpy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I've Got HIV by PoeticSoulja


Clamining those who look like me
Share my skin
My youth and vivacity
The Fear?
That I may never get to see my full potential.
Fear that one day I'll hear those devastating words
"You Have AIDS"
An illness, uncurable
Taking the lives of those around me, slowly and painfully
Affecting women, children, men...this illness has no face
The Fear.
It spreads
Devours lives and rips famillies apart
Causes agony, unexplainable
Some don't care if they spread it
Others share this infectious monster knowingly
Many don't even know they have it...



THE AWARENESS?
We should all go out and make SURE we get tested.
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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (11:27 PM)
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  Chocolate1-on-...
07/10/09 (09:09 AM) 
wonderful write....WOW....yo you did ya thing..........its gr8 that your talking about this....cus alot of people throw it "under the RUG"....as if it doesnt exist.ten stz

  T.J.STA
03/12/09 (12:20 PM) 
Amen 2 dat sweetie...We all should go out and make SURE that we get tested, kno whut I'm sayin'?? I'm feelin' this write...

  me-me
12/13/08 (04:54 PM) 
i feel you on this one great write

  PoeticSoulja
12/07/08 (01:30 AM) 
There are numerous people unknowingly helping the disease progress every time they have a sexual encounter. This illness might be an everlasting burden for mankind. This respond is nicely written and truly thought provoking. Good job Beth :)

  B. Rose
12/04/08 (09:59 AM) 
NO doubt yo... because thats some crazy ass shit yo... for reals not knowing is a whole worse.. you could have it and be spreading it as we speak yo...

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