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"THE FIRST TIME"
  by TWANGINU


The first time we made love
was something new to me
she was so into me
just wanted to hold me
kiss me...
told me to never leave her
never let her go
to pull her closer
she looked me in my eyes as i went deeper
kitaboo knows just how to make a nigga melt
feel like a real man
and made sure she came when i did...
i thought i saw a tear in her eyes...
asking her was she ok...
damn we were making love
playing with her spot
made her almost go crazy yall...
in the back of my mind i was smiling
cause i knew i was putting it down
sucking on those big ass tits
her nails in my skin
but thats not on my mind
just giving her all my love
til her juices came
making my dick grow
like she was out watering the garden
and this was all in the same night
our first time making love
and i got a smile on my face now
....danm.....
first time
but in my mind it goes on and on
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Date Submitted: Oct 22, 2009 (12:53 AM)
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  Lady_Style
11/01/09 (01:57 PM) 
One of those memories that can definatley go on n on lol...i often look back on my unforgettable moments...this was some lovely ink...Nicely penned!

  SmAsH/BaByFaCe
10/23/09 (01:18 AM) 
Great write homie. I especially loved yur wordplay. You definitely painted a picture,nah a scene with your words. Look forward toreading some moreof you writes, keep \'em coming

  Coko Phantysii
10/22/09 (07:02 PM) 
haha...awww, this was like a cross between erotic and love. you def did your thing with this one. good write

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