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"The gift of love"
  by Juciy


Fate dropped by today
knocking on my door
straight to my inner core
Told me that todays your lucky day
Take this and run with it
Trust me its legit
Confused but curious
I did what I was told to do
I ran and ran and I found you
Can you guess what was given to me?
something beautiful and so rare
and has to be handled with much care
The gift of love I was given
I waited for this moment all my life
and now I no longer have pain or strife
but then hope gave me a visit
Said to keep my head up high
For jealousy might stop by
So I braced myself
and jealousy sure made an appearance
squirming its way in for interference
Faith spoke to me ever so gently
giving me all this trust
reminding me that this is a must
Soon enough jealousy had no chance
A fighter I have come to be
All because the gift of love was given to me.


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Date Submitted: Sep 14, 2008 (02:49 AM)
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  J.Hard
02/24/09 (10:11 PM) 
nicely put... keep it up

  Land Roving
10/16/08 (08:28 PM) 
Deep Deep Depp!!!! 10's here Keep doing ya thing

  Jody
10/12/08 (09:53 PM) 
this was beautiful... I love the "characters", that's real and written really nice... I would love "Fate's" email address tho? phone number... must of messed up my package... lol, im just kiddn' around... very nice.

  J.px2
10/08/08 (11:59 PM) 
i agree da flow was crazy...nice poem mos def 10 stars

  I Am Real...I ...
10/02/08 (02:02 AM) 
i like the flow of it..i am feeling u through ur words

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