for the situations
people are facing
got 'em casing, craving, maniacally raving,
debasing selves...
ducking shots
behind cinder blocks
and pointing guns
and fingers at
good and also,
crooked cops
recruited to watch
out for you...
though its the evil that men do
that threw them
and you
into
high noon type snafus
with planted guns
and forensic scenes
to figure which one drew first
him
or
you
but still Al
showed up to say
this could have been handled
a whole different way
but this way,
so many people got
stories and thoughts
framed
and the inside scoop on
games
and ideas
to make it appear
that they got control
this year
but I was reading the obituaries...
and no body died who deserved it
or at least that the way we all heard it
"He was a good dude"
but somehow,
his Baby's momma was cold blooded
and brought their child along
during the while
she gutted him
from navel to Adam’s apple
and gave the baby a pacified Snapple
to keep him quiet
cause he's obese at two
from all the fast food
she through into
never denying Fatman
a scoop of
anything but you [the father]
and who's daddy anyway?
not the 9-5er she ran for his loot
or the flattop....now faded
...that she thought was so cute
nah,
only the woo knows the truth…
she was raped by his best friend,
a certified brute
who said she nodded [yes]
when her brain got looped
so who fucking cares about the kid, anyway
and he always has felt such, anyway
so now he's standing outside
...a runaway
and the heart genlty weeps....
cause there is no love in his heart
but there is a gun in his hand
and he has no respect for himself
or the approaching man
freakng cycle is a blip! and for the record if you coulda this woulda been a tight piece to drop audio, no subliminals... lol, feel like I can't tel lyou to drop an audio no more... lol, and Fatman Scroop Crooklyn Clan, Fatman Scoop Crooklyn Clan only east coast? what? lol, random tangent for you cuz you know I got 'em... he cool dude, met him and seen him in his draws... lol, I know that sounds bad but the man just hype like that... lol... cool ppl from my short encounter and of course he hy... [+]more
freakng cycle is a blip! and for the record if you coulda this woulda been a tight piece to drop audio, no subliminals... lol, feel like I can't tel lyou to drop an audio no more... lol, and Fatman Scroop Crooklyn Clan, Fatman Scoop Crooklyn Clan only east coast? what? lol, random tangent for you cuz you know I got 'em... he cool dude, met him and seen him in his draws... lol, I know that sounds bad but the man just hype like that... lol... cool ppl from my short encounter and of course he hype as eva, okay what were we talking about? lol, oh yeah the poem... I'm sorry and I'm really trying to work on my commenting... I want you to rate me good, lol, but I think this piece is dope... a true story... "that be reality" unfortunately... gotta get off that loop... or better yet broken record. [-]collapse
so fuckin profound...the fatman scoop metaphor was genius...im sure only east coasters will catch that ;) the obituary part...genius...the good dude part reminds me of some shit jay-z would say...loved this
"but I was reading the obituaries...
and no body died who deserved it
or at least that the way we all heard it " dang this whole ink was deep, this line was deep and i had to stop and read it a few times. Very powerful work here!!