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"the homeless"
A LaLa14 and that_boy1 Collaboration


  that_boy1:

i mean we pass up in down the streets all day in dnt pay attention to those thats on the ground beggin for 2 dollars in u just pass them up like its nothing i mean we really need to do somthing about it i mean thay human just like us so why are they any differant why u cant be like well get in my car imma buy u a hot meal to put on ur stomatch and take them in to have a bed to sleep on in a bath to take a shower in i mean this the part u guys forgotten but we really need to open our eyes

  LaLa14:

well see me i see wat chu talkin bout we need to help those in need
well see me if i could i would help dem feed
see we may pass dem but we gotta think
maybe we dont got the money or room or a shower to wash of dey stink
cuz some people got it just as rough...but have you eva noticed that
when you give dem money it aint food dey buy sum beer no grease or fat
can buy a burger an fries for 2 dollas an sum change but no dey buy beer
how can we help when to helpless souls is where dey stear

  that_boy1:

i mean they out just on they own in they cant get help for themselves so lets help

  LaLa14:

aiight im down big bro but how we gone do dat
i can make room in da basement an lay down a few mats
give dem sum water to wash an sum old clothes to wear
cuz real seein dat make to mi eye's cum a tear

  that_boy1:

i will have a place for one of them sister in u can have space for the other one i mean we gonna make it work iight sister

  LaLa14:

yea aiight but we need to help more den one
i found a homeless lady who happen to have a son
i dicided i will take dem in i cant see a child suffer
so i let in mi home the boy an his mother
the mother wuz bout mi age dey been on da streets for a min.
gave dem food and clothes an a place to sleep they slept till ten
then i dicided if im really gone help dem she gotta get a job
an that dont include the houses around the way need to be rob.
i got her together an now she got a job savein for sum rent
but the lil boy wuz smart so it wuz to school he wuz sent

  that_boy1:

well we all gonna come together in realize that this iz not a game so dnt take it as one i mean we walk up in down the streets but never once thought we walkin on a bed of the homeless but i need for somebody to come with me and make a stand cause this shit wasnt the plain at all so lets just come together in make the people feel like they apart of us in lets stop fukkin around ya know in make the people believe that it iz somthing worth livin for in not just diein like this of starvation,beat,mured,rapped,stab i mean come on now in espelly on the street's of new york homeless people get killed like everyday why it's becuz they asked for a dollar the wrong way in got they life tooken just like that i mean if we was to give them a house to live in water to drink in water to take a bath in food to eat it would be so much better in the world...huh lil sis

  LaLa14:

yea big bro all we gotta do is try
cuz you neva kno u try an tha next homeless aint gone die
cuz they in da safety of dey house an wit dey fam
so all i got to ask is do you really give a damn
cuz if you do
throw a dolla or two
make they day make dem smile
cuz they next next tyme they may smile may be a while
to give dem a home i kno a lot may not be able to
but buy dem sum food thas all you gotta do
even if they do die tomorrow at least they died glad
food in dey stomach an not gone be mad
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Date Submitted: Sep 27, 2007 (05:30 PM)
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  'x'GhOsT'x'
07/25/08 (11:07 PM) 
you both killed it this was ill but really deep great job for the both of you i give 10 stars ya dig

  shadae
06/16/08 (09:32 AM) 
that was good but sad 10 starz my fav.

  SexyGlamourGir...
03/31/08 (10:05 PM) 
This poem is ture life i love keep up the work

  Jody
12/11/07 (01:25 AM) 
It's always good to see when folks are trying to to do good. I see a lot of people on the streets, beggin' & grippin' for anything to spare/ it eats me up everytime/ never gets old. Like you I wish I could scoop them all in my arms and fix every need heck maybe even wants/ the pains I just can't stand/ yes some of them lie/ yes some of them drink/ but honestly I'd rather them scam my few change then to really be the truth/ cuz suffering I can't take but the reality is the homeless do exist. ...
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  De'Sean
11/25/07 (11:12 PM) 
This was hot right here. I really like the collabe and VERY nice write. 10 * 's

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