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"The Hurting"
  by Guey2


Inner City Blues (Make Me Wanna Holler) - Marvin Gaye

The Pain the pain it wont go away.
no matter how many times she showers
it wont wash away.
He took
They took
The world took
her innocence
.
replaced
.
it
.
with
.
the
.
pain.

She's young lost
hates
to be overweight
she distances herself
she isolates
people only want what they can get
then they dissipate

She wants someone to love her
oh every bone in her body creaks
for someone to just love her
he cheats
.
why
.
cant
.
he
.
just
.
love
.
her

The baby smiles not
knowing its task
twenty years of of pain
inside one past
dear devotion to her
strengths mask

things wont change
they'll always be the same
why?
no matter how many times
she jabs
the world sits back
it laughs

She misses
the time she was in his arms
those moments in time
are safe from harm
he's
.
gone
.
he's
.
gone
.
oh my GOD!
.
he's
.
gone
.
the pains begun

She's shy
she's nervous
she stares warily
please,
please just recognize
the hurting

She has a future
she has despair
shall these two intertwine
does anyone care.





I

like

to

think

i

do.
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Date Submitted: Jun 08, 2008 (01:43 PM)
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  fafou
09/07/09 (07:26 PM) 
*sigh* the inner thoughts of a girl with low self esteem...confidence issues..self hate perhaps..&the world just doesn't understand what she's going through...&she puts herself in the palm of a guy thats just there to abuse her(not physically)....yesss. sounds familiar. i've been there. most of us have. beautiful write...i missed this.

  aerial
04/22/09 (12:35 PM) 
Wow. in a way i can relate. this poem is good its strong and emotional meaningful and true. so true. keep writing that good stuff. 10 stars.

  MzFyne_N_Bless...
02/03/09 (12:09 PM) 
Oh dang...why didnt I read this any sooner??!! This write is VERY emotional...I wonder how you tapped into this, this a amazing gift for you to be able to write like this. Wow!! And Yes, everyone cares...just at certain times people can be some into themselves that they could never notice if some else is hurting or not. But this is a Amazing write...ten starz

  Brain
01/24/09 (11:45 PM) 
wow

  timesticking
11/26/08 (11:24 AM) 
YOUNG WOMAN GO THROUGH THINGS LIKE THIS DAILY IT'S A SHAME NO ONE LISTENS.THIS POEM IS DEFINATELY THE BUSSINESS

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