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"The Intro (seeking redempption) ch.1"
  by ARCH ANGEL
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The Prologue by ARCH ANGEL


Staring at the happy ones
Wishing I cud trade places
My mouths wired shut
Like newly acquired braces
Tempted by my old ways
Being called by weeds laced hit
If I reach out and take it
My sacrifices wud be wasted

Fuck waist deep
I'm burried by my waves of sin
Mentally shaken
My worlds become caved in
Holding what's left of my life
I simply throw it to the ocean
Let me wash away in this pity
An evaporate into nothing
I Keep on fighting
But I'm bruised within
How can I expect to be acepted
When I was cast out by kin

Ery1 has a story
I'm just trapped in a fable
Just tryna write the pain away
Pondering how to put food on the table
I'm not just angered
I'm enraged and unstable
Morphed and mishapen by life
Just the devils playto
Acepted defeat
Doesn't make me a quitter
Wish I wuda be undelivered
Forced to die a lonely nigga
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Date Submitted: Jul 05, 2009 (04:30 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/06/09 (12:07 AM)
Author: ARCH ANGEL
Poem Title: Path Ahead(seeking r...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  ButterflyDream
07/09/09 (11:50 PM) 
This what I love about poetry,bleeding truth... and Ive kinda gotten away from that lately.This is amazing arch,keep putting your pain or paper...Ive always found poetry to be somewhat of a comforter.

  AR-15
07/08/09 (10:25 PM) 
Twisted turmoil indeed.. well written..

  vagrom
07/05/09 (07:27 PM) 
you always manage to ooze so much emotion and inner turmoil in your writes...a truly comendable skill...

  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/05/09 (04:43 PM) 
damn, sad ish, but felt emotions showcased well bruh, nice ink, as always sick word play

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