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"The Journey"
  by darkclowd







Listen close to my whispers
on the autumn winds...
for they tell of the secret
passage to my realm.Through twining vines
and tangled trees, a hidden
path leads to an enchanted
place, rich and strange. Look with the open
mind of a child...
let imagination
be your guide... a new world will
unfold, before
your very eyes... a wondrous place of
dreams and desires...
now spread your
wings and fly. Follow the path to my heart,
through twisted trees
and shadowy hollows...
with only a candle to
light your way. Let my passion
be your guide, as you
embark on a journey
to a hidden realm
filled with enchantment. My path is an ancient one,
my heart is true and wise... I celebrate your fertile youth,
and see with open eyes... I seek the mysteries of your soul,
and dance beneath its gaze... I pay homage to your gentle touch,
and lift my arms to hold you tight, Follow your wildest dreams,
wherever they may take you... Celebrate each moment you're given,
for your time on earth is precious... Remember to believe in love,
look and see it all around you... Let your spirit be a beacon,
lighting the way through darkness... In the end it's love that matters,
and how your life is truly measured



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Date Submitted: Oct 04, 2007 (11:19 AM)
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  Swallowed`Scro...
01/11/08 (04:15 AM) 
i love how you introduced this poem, the imagery captured me and you absolutely won me over mentioning the autumn winds ahhhh :-) such a serene feel to this piece

  foremanlin
10/06/07 (10:44 PM) 
i agree with cado astrum really rich write, expecially the start of the poem.

  Bud Edward
10/04/07 (11:57 AM) 
Very well-written. The imagery really is breathtaking, and you expressed this perfectly.

  cado astrum
10/04/07 (11:49 AM) 
Lovely imagery. I like the beginning especially.

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