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"the key holder"
  by B.R
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Letting Go....hmmm... by DOMINICANPOET


dying

to dp....don't respond to this plez just if we gone part lemme do it on a positive note........shud b like 6stanzas if not refresh da page....oh and nessa dnt call me an idiot becuz u dnt know da full situation......



used 2 be so close..now ur further then a lightyear..u were the dream..right afta my nightmares..when I felt down..look left..u were right there...its not u were horrible..just chose to not care...its so hard to see ur smile..n not stare...

maybe it'll become easier to let u go..as im older..becuz how can I forget my hearts key holder...feels like my chest been ran over...by a range rover...no heat or passion...so im getting colder...but its summer so im not supposa...thinkn how many times can a nigga start over..until he loses the adrenaline from the roller coaster

I've been withered..just dead leaves to her beautiful spring...its hard to get over her when her aurora sings...n to go feels like 1million stings...to the heart or the wings ripped from the dragonking...she was the magic carpet beneath..my feet now wondering if I have a heart beat..becuz I can't breathe...its hard to believe..this the end..so let me so this quickly...so lesson the greive..becuz its hard to not feel u..when ur souls in the breeze

((just in case da beat ran out reclick))
dying

but I know I can't return...but the words or poems I did for her I meant..I wnt take em back no returns...just words...not anyone elses but hers...accept them or throw em away...eitha way..I still love ya anyway...won't get over u in a day.week or month..but ill try anyway..

so ill leave on a good note..its hard to re read these words wrote..prb harder to type then anythng I've eva spoke I silently recite n still choke...lost her to lost hope...

so with these last words ill go.....I love you...just so you know...did my best to show..but distracted by too many..idk's or so's...learning from this tragedy hoping I can grow...no army no...ill just fight a new battle...and leave this alone......

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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2008 (07:56 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/17/08 (12:07 AM)
Author: DOMINICANPOET
Poem Title: Dead Yet Alive...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (10)
  mz_April
08/16/08 (10:43 AM) 
hey ya did da man han good write and i love the final fantasy songs (lol ff freak over here ) 10 strs nicely written

  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
07/25/08 (04:14 PM) 
Honestly....i couldn't read it...don't kno why but either way...i kno u..and how u think...and feel...so judging by the song and the content b4...it's about loving but lettin go...coupld be wrong doe...since i can't read it....lol..like i said my dude...keep ur head up...u kno how strong you are!.and so does she...sadly in life we take so much 4 granted until it's no longer in our reach...so we think...but it's those thing's...those people...those situation's that u are forced 2 choose...do i go...
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  Shane Polo
07/23/08 (01:48 PM) 
im feelin uuu on this. these are like some words i wanted 2 say to someone..this is deep. 10 stars most def

  Living Legend ...
07/20/08 (11:04 PM) 
dame my nigga you did your thang on this write im digging this write.. keep doing your thang 100% Living Legend 2 keep doing your thang.. hit my page up and check some of my writes

  KINGLO
07/17/08 (03:41 PM) 
yo flow's keep get n better and bett3r G

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