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"The Last Ride"
  by JuztBe
  - This Poem is a response to the poem DOUGH BENEATH MY FINGERTIPS... by --->QUEENPIN OF THE INK P...




DOUGHBOY

(As I rise to open up my line,
I think of you in the mist of my time,
The way you captivated me with the words you speak from your lips,
You gave me meaning without even showing me the way you move your hips,
So in this message
I'll tell you that I miss U,
So bad that I ran through a whole roll of Scotts Tissues,
So "Excuse Me Miss"
Can I know you "from the inside out" ?
Cause with out you Im "lost" like the pad you talked about,
Can I be part of "The Art Of Love Making" or your potential "Soulmate",
You gave me "the Healing Process"
So "when love comes"
Why wait.... ??? )


Because i thought we had tomorrow
not realizing we only had 730 days to go
from the moment i laid eyes on ur poetry
i knew who u and i was going to be
Lovers connected by ink
but carried by an unbreakable link
and even as i feel my heart on the brink
of dying i still find joy in all this because as my heart bleeds i think
that i had 730 wonderful days to know you
and even though we had our problems one thing is true
like real soulmates no one knew of them but me and you
though everyone knew of the love that we shared
it showed thru poetry a connection not many others could compare
So that day two years ago when u said let take it there
although i was scared of love u were to me like a childs teddy bear
wrapping me in your poetry making me secure in knowing i had the best
and even now as your body is laid to rest
your soul still lingers because u couldnt stand to be far from me
and i know God wouldnt be that cruel knowing who u are to me
my soulmate my love my best friend the man i only dreamed existed
so when you asked why wait im glad i didnt risk it
because i would have missed out on something not many other have ever seen
a love that lasts a lifetime even the grave cant come between
the tears flow heavily but there is a smile that graces my face
because i know i will see u again and we will begin again our journey on this poetic race.




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Date Submitted: Jun 18, 2009 (02:37 PM)
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  Arcane
08/19/09 (02:56 PM) 
Wow... This above real... This is the most beautiful thing I've read in so long.. One of my favorite poems as of yet..It's real and pure.. and it hurts to read because he's truly missed...

  big josh
07/30/09 (02:16 PM) 
this was truly a heartfelt piece and I know that he is lookin down on you with a great smile, this piece was amazing, nicely done :)

  MsBadIntention...
06/21/09 (10:07 PM) 
*tears fall from my eyes* you know i know what he meant to you..you two were dam near inseparable all the good times we had in IK will never be forgotten i will even cherish the not so good times arguing and the back n forth....im here for you if u need me..i havent brought myself around to really feeling an emotion yet each day a memory of him slowly creeps outta me ..just know im here :'-(

  D.K Lord of Da...
06/20/09 (06:56 AM) 
I can only imagine your pain, i know how close you were..If you eed to talk hit me up mammi.. I am in total shock and disbelief..bows head dough had a heart of gold and the strength of a lion.. wise head on them young shoulders... Keep strong cuz you and i know that is what he would want....much love mammi DK

  Drea s
06/20/09 (02:27 AM) 
IM SO SO SORRY HUN.THIS PIECE BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES. I NEVER WANT TO LOVE AND LOOSE LIKE THIS THIS IS ACTUALLY ONE OF MY BIGGEST FEARS.MY PRAYERS GO OUT TO U

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