ay this was real creative, I'm diggin da flow this was hot for real, nice write ma :)

love the point and the concept you brought to this...structure of this could be adjusted....you wrote it in a sense where it ws too long where you could pieced some of the words....but continue to push that pen...nice job

Thats the realest talk plus it attracts the eye before reading just by the layout then delivers promisingly with a mind provoking flow that makes you really think about it lond after your done reading good piece

This poem is the truth. Everything you were talking about is true. I liked the way this poem flowed. You killed it with the pen. Great write and 10 stars from me

The truth!