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"the love aint there no more"
  by LaLa14


man life is so crazy
now a days people jus get more lazy
how is it yo fam dont even bother to love you no more
wats the friends before fam thing for
people claim to love others but is it real
why do they claim false things they dont even feal
they get mad when others before them but turn around an do it to you
man ma life is so fuccked up i dont kno wat to do
i dont kno if there is a such thing as other people luvin me
no im not lookin for attention to be drawn to me
these are things i jus notice like we spose to be fam
dont fam love each other an wit love you give a damn
so how did it come down to the only way to feel good was for them to be high
thinkin they helpin you by pretendin an lie
they be liein bout lovein you an carein
to have a good relationship they aint darein
you say you love some one they say it back
but they dont make it a fact
one little thing an that love is gone, bye bye
one mistake an love was a lie
blood an play, tears an pain...man is love worth it
when i think bout it ma mind have a fit
it gets confused an my emotions go crazy
do any body realize they love gettin lazy
back in the day buyin a diamond wasn't showin love
so much disappointment come from the man above

man
wat is love any more?
do you got the answer??
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Date Submitted: Feb 11, 2008 (03:13 AM)
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  j babi
04/01/08 (04:22 PM) 
im so feeling it was so true

  SexyGlamourGir...
03/31/08 (09:55 PM) 
i love this poem and how you express your self keep it up

  B Easy
03/14/08 (12:31 AM) 
Shit i dont know the answers either. But i do know that this is hot. Real hot. Im loving your writtin style on this one, your bringing something new to the table. Keep up the hot writes. Get at me

  bettycrocker15
02/13/08 (08:09 PM) 
this wuz good.

  *Pooky*
02/12/08 (11:41 AM) 
WOW, YOU SPOKE NOTHIN BUT TRUTH FROM BEGINNING TO END ON DIS PIECE RIGHT HERE MAMA...I LIKE DIS ONE IT'S SO TRUE...IT'S A FAV. AND UM GIVIN YA 10 STARZ FOR IT...MZ.POOKY

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