GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Forum
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow Sigmatic's PREVIOUS POEM Sigmatic's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"The Love Note"
A Sigmatic and (*B00*) Collaboration


  Sigmatic:

Dear Jada,
i been noticing you for some time,
so I was wondering if there was a way possible that I could make you mine.
excuse me if I'm coming at you the wrong way,
but I think about you with every passing day.
your body remind me of athis exotic work of art.
jada you're a beautiful masterpiece from finish to start.
write me back
still thinking of you
wanting you to be my boo

Sincerely
David

  (*B00*):

DEAR DAViD,
you hAd me from the start
maybe im to far ahead buh this is whats in my heart
im fall`n for you
i dont love you
but then again maybe i do?
no..
im just thinking of what it could be
possibly you and me?
so what am i to do?
are you really gonna be tru?

xoxo
your soon to be[?]
jada babe

  Sigmatic:

Dear Jada,
how you doing miss lady? still thinking about you.
i'm giving you my heart so that you'll know my words are true.
i don't wanna seem like i'm in a rush,
but I was wondering when are you and I getting together to make an "US"
i'm not trying to put on this flashy presentation,
so just give me a hour of your day so we can spark some conversation.
i wanna get to know you from the outside in,
and maybe a relationship between us can begin.
you mean more than other girls whose number are in my phone.
just give me one chance. I won't do you wrong.
jada I'm not coming at you tryin to shoot game,
but I'm making a long term investment so our last name can be the same.
to my future boo
dedicating my love to you
from your favorite SIGMA wearing BLU

all my love
David

  (*B00*):

DEAR DAViD
im doing pretty good
i hope what im bout to say wont be misunderstood
giving me your heart just doesnt seem real
i mean i admire your zeal
then again maybe what you say can be proven real?
am i throwing you off with my words?
because what im say`n
i just wanna be heard
i want you to understand were im coming from
how my knowlege of love has just begun
you see its time i forget my past
so you and i can last
even tho we havnt had a beginning
i feel together were winning
can you take me step by step?
sweetie i could really use the help
if you are true
im most definitely ready to be Y0UR boo
talk to you later my SiGMA BLU
yours truly,
jada B00




  Sigmatic:

Dear Jada
i wanted to let you know how beautiful you are.
you're one of the most sexiest girls by far.
when I think about you I get these butterflies
i don't want to come off as the same as those other lame guys.
let me know if i'm wasting my time
so i can go off and find another dime
i hope you're not leading me in circles
because i don't kiss no girl's ass or jump no hurdles.
bringin this conversation to close
diggin you and not no other hoes.
hoping a love between us can grow

sincerely
David

P.S. Say yes.

  (*B00*):

DEAR DAViD,
i guess theres not much to say
but yess.
see you later sigma blu

xoxox
yA b00
© 2000-2008 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Apr 20, 2007 (09:27 AM)
search icon
Viewed: 220 times
user icon
Rating: Rating of 1Rating of 2Rating of 3Rating of 4Rating of 5Rating of 6Rating of 7Rating of 8Rating of 9Rating of 10 (352,638 Points)
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 4 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
 
key Log In to rate this poem or add it to your favorites.
 



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (30)
  mz_April
08/05/08 (07:33 PM) 
this is great you both killed it with this one im rweally diggin it

  cclark
04/21/08 (07:22 PM) 
i like it and good write keep it up

  JayDee
01/23/08 (08:36 PM) 
awww i thought that this piece was soo cute and creative loved it

  Modia
01/04/08 (10:46 PM) 
This is one of the most FANTASTIC collab's I have ever read...You both had me engrossed from start to finish, you guys were completely in sync with one another and it was just perfect...10, 10, 10!

  A~BENEVOLENT~Q...
07/20/07 (04:41 PM) 
VERY NICE, THE FLOW WAS REALLY GOOD....I FOLLOWED IT ALL THE WAY THROUGH. LIKE YOUR STYLE SIGMATIC, CASUAL ANS NOT TRYING TO STUNT LIKE MOST DUDES TODAY. TELLING YOU ABOUT EVERYTHING THEY GOT AND NOT TELLING YOU WHAT'S REALLY IN THEIR HEAR...10STARS PAPI...-G-

Page(s): 1  2  3  4  5 
key Log In to rate or comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow Sigmatic's PREVIOUS POEM Sigmatic's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy