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"The Magic Of Christmas"
  by WIZ
  - This Poem is a response to the poem A SENSITIVIE TEAR by williesidney


There's excitement in the air,and music everywhere!
The shiny tinsel, bells, and bows, Mistleto, and goodies in rows!

Snowflakes, gaisty, laughter and fun and presents galore for everyone!

The radiant, bright faces and sparkling eyes,
of children awaiting Sanat's surprise!

Yes, its Christmas, and people are happy and gay,
and looking for friends from far away!

There's a magic in the holidays that's hard to define,
and it seems only to happen at this particular time!

What puzzles me most, is that when it has gone,
why doesn't goodwill and love linger on?

The boredom returns, and we struggle along,
forgetting the joys, and the laughter and song

I wonder if we are changing our ways about Christmas,
and the Holy event that took place?

It's a time to rejoice for our dear Savior's birth,
and to thank Him for giving us life here on earth!

To lose the compassion and love that day is wrong,
and should not be cast away!

Our lives should be calm, and peaceful and bright,
as it was on that glorious starry, night!

When a sweet little babe, wrapped in swaddling clothes,
came to give us His love, and to cleanse all our souls!

Is it asking to much to be grateful to Him,
who gave us salvation and forgives all our sins?

So again may I add, why must holidays end?
Keep on loving, rejoicing -be happy my friend!




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Date Submitted: Dec 23, 2008 (06:33 AM)
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  big josh
01/08/09 (05:43 PM) 
dis was a well written response, 10s ma much luv

  Jamillah
01/02/09 (12:09 AM) 
beautifully written.. and so's the sentiment.. i don't particularly advocate believing things that simply are not true.. namely that Jesus was born on Dec. 25 2009 years ago.. i think deluding ourselves simply isn't a good thing. But all that aside.. the message that love and compassion and all the wonderful feelings and actions that abound this time of year should continue all year is right on.... that's the important thing.... nice piece.

  jerl
12/30/08 (11:28 AM) 
Absolutely! You know the reason for the season! I know you speak nothing but truth here and the heavens must be shouting and rejoicng every time this is read. Woo, such a play on words, such smooth word flow. Girl, keep doing your thing and inspiring others.

  beLOVEd
12/24/08 (08:10 PM) 
i absolutely love this... i'm a person who'll sing a christmas song in july because of that magic you speak of and to give praise to the Lord. you sense it all around you... everyone's spirit is so full of gleee. it's an amazing time of year for sure. merry christmas and be peace.

  (Floetic~One) ...
12/24/08 (02:13 PM) 
this iz a very wonderful spiritual piece... you covered the tru meaning of Christmas... God bless you and have a wonderful holiday. 10 starz

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