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"The Mind behind The Storyline"
  by Speechless


the glory of life is tested
when reality hurries the process
the borderline crosses and the storyline gets deadly
so watch where you steppin when you walkin life's directions.
the time is steady and my grind is ready
but my mind so heavy its difficult to carry.
digital thoughts transparent visuals
the picture so clear keep God near to you
and sin to the rear of you, leave it behind
but its in the rearview like i press rewind
and it keep steerin to you, swervin in my lane
like we deservin to feel such pain
enough games thats played out
but the world still playin it out while we prayin about...
happiness, financial security, and the ability to really be.
but the stability cannot be
more civilians cannot sleep because killings will increase
and diseases still feast.
only thing promised is lives will decease
so when i die i wanna die in peace
not get popped in these streets.
to guarantee, i'll have to move from the block which um not
knock knock another test to endure
its sin again sayin pick a card.
gamble think you won then lose or choose to pay yo dues
with God of second chances
available through all circumstances. he is the answer no question.
the message inside the lesson fifty fifty
keep livin or be history
the mind behind the storyline defines with time.
so dear so deep so clear a blind man can see.

god
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Date Submitted: Feb 26, 2008 (01:26 AM)
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  shylady789
03/10/08 (01:03 AM) 
i see said the blind man i see...what you doin' here is real real good i love it keep it up

  nikishab
03/09/08 (10:42 PM) 
another incrediable poem. I love your work.

  Truessence4u
03/07/08 (08:35 PM) 
YES, the people that the world calls abnormal are the people who see (better) in a sense than those that have natural vision prime example: a blind man can see light in darkness ....before there was light there was darkness (religiously speaking) GENESIS

  SyMpHoNy
03/07/08 (03:26 PM) 
OMG! This is phenomenal,words nice formulated. tempo is right. I really love it. Infact this will be one of my favorite. keep up the good work. I give u ten starz and two thumbs. It's the bombs

  koolaid
03/01/08 (01:10 PM) 
i loved thiso ne right here i could feel where you was coming from and its true only god can judge but its a shame ppl seem to judge on a daily basis.....10starz

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