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"The Mind Goes Dancing, Instinct Takes Over"
  by NyamhPoetry


7pm, and you welcome me in
We're still just strangers
I was the one, I wouldn't let you find

8pm, and the drinks are pouring in
We're still just aquaintences
Though I knew, in the back of my mind

9pm, and my memory betrays me
How did I end up with a friend
Alone with no other?

10pm, I swear I felt your lips?
It's a dream, and i'll wake
Away from you my lover

11pm, words leave my mouth
But who cares! Today I feel close to you
And I live in the moment

Midnight, and it's time
The clock seems to strike
And the chemistry is free to wonder
I wonder why, I had that barrier
And my mind's gone, I'm hanging on instinct
Seems instinct leads me to you
And before I know it, I'll never know how

Time fails to exsist now
My mind goes dancing
My body is only just aware

Instinct led me here
I'm still not sure how
Somehow I'm awake

And in the arms of another
In the arms of my lover
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Date Submitted: Jul 05, 2009 (09:16 AM)
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  santiago\\\\\\...
10/06/09 (08:08 PM) 
believe it or not i feel like this everyday.....

  stranger
07/05/09 (04:36 PM) 
I can't stop smiling, a penetrating write in many ways ,insightful, beautiful structuring, dramatic and capturing the ethereal unreality of being carried along by emotions... captivating writing , holding attention and tantalising... nice composition :)

  bbeauty
07/05/09 (12:16 PM) 
THIS WAS TIGHT.....ARE WE GOING TO BLAME THIS ONE ON THE ALCOHOL...SMILE....B BLESS

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