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"The Mistake"
  by JokerJay


They say there’s always tomorrow for dreams to come true
But what about today when I’m feeling so blue?
Because I can’t always just forget her
Not when we seemingly had forever
I can’t close my eyes with seeing visions of her face
And when her tears would fall that’d be my disgrace
Why is my existence filled with the pain of needles & pins?
How much longer must I trek before the pleasure begins?
I remember when I held her before all the shit we did
Back when I said “You’re one in a million, Kid”
It was the truth…it could never be a lie
But I’d be lying if I told you that I never cry
Because I told her to get the fuck off my knife
When I should have told her to just walk outta my life
I made a drunken mistake and now her blood is on my hands
I never really wanted this to happen…I hope she understands
I know she’s somewhere over the rainbow…so far away…so far
In my heart I know she’s a constellation within the stars
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Date Submitted: Sep 21, 2009 (04:38 PM)
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  Nikkii*3
11/16/09 (09:07 PM) 
This is really deep.. You wrote your pain so well... Good work, chin up buddy. (:

  Psychosis Aka ...
11/01/09 (12:22 PM) 
I can relate to this scribe great write. The ending was killer ! bravo my fellow author !

  คว...
10/05/09 (11:02 PM) 
wow, very deep piece....your words made a huge impact....especially the knife line....that was a wowsa.....

  Showcase
10/01/09 (09:49 PM) 
I caught a tear in my eye seriouly this has me in awe touching and beautifully written love pEACE.elevate

  The Clinician
10/01/09 (08:30 PM) 
Some real food for thought. I'm away from my girl and its tough. I definitely know how you feel on this one.

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