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"The More They Talk"
A LatrinaThePoet and MR. BYRD Collaboration


  MR. BYRD:

These....
Envious lies
That they spread
Are faded thoughts in my head
So they...try to force us to argue shit that's irrelevant
Instead of embracing the love that's quite evident
To us....
But...
My friends keep telling me that you're not the wife type
Who lives the sadity life
Telling me I need to think twice
Before my feelings get sliced
But...your friends think I'm like all the other brothers
Saying I'm slick with my words
Saying I'm no good nigga causing nothing but trouble
How they figure???
People love blaming shit and pointing the finger
Cus they want what we have
So they laugh when we're throwing argumentive fits
But mad as shit, when we're out living the life
Baby don't believe the hype
As they want to serenade you with lies
This why the talk what they think they know
But what they don't know is that love will continue to grow

  LatrinaThePoet:

I just wanted you to know;
that despite the lies our love will show
the more they talk about us
the clearer we show with success
a strong, healthy relation
don't worry about what i hear..
they just dealing with there own frustration
sit tight, have no fear
i can separate a true form a false information
they just mad we in our 10th year
well, nah.. they just outspoken
because then been heart broken
just a lil jealous
excuse them ladies and the fellas..
they haven't saw lovers quite like us;
as we caress.
and your shoulder i unbrush
telling them lier to hush
throw that bug in your ear
did you here me whisper "I'm here.."
and the more lies they spread
the more we go ahead
instead falling apart
and killing sum beautiful
i wont Commit a crime so awful..



  MR. BYRD:

See.....
They only....talk what they know
To only get a rise out of the emotions
That we show
But what they don't know
It don't matter
Look at us two, who only knew
That we could weather the storm
With the shit that swarms our way
They see us laughin, now they ain't got nothing to say
You right baby, let them haters mumble under their breath
Cus the more they talk, our love gets stronger
So fuck the naysayers shawty, I trust in your word
Now lets do what we do best and take on the world....

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Date Submitted: Sep 05, 2009 (08:59 AM)
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  *Jazique*
09/07/09 (11:03 PM) 
I hate when other people try to get in someone elses relationship....or try to tell you that the person you're with is to good to be true or that they're just using you etc....anyways i like that you guys spoke of this...

  MizDuval
09/06/09 (01:59 AM) 
damn ima have 2 fav this one cuz i can def relate...it's sad that ppl wud try to sabatoge a gud relationship just for the sake of thier selffishness...and the enjoyment they wud get out of seeing sumone else be miserable...misery loves company...man...this was a very intense piece...u both did an excellent job with this collabo...this really hit home from me cuz i been thru this exact ish...nicely done...ten starz and a job well done :-)

  Planted Daisie...
09/05/09 (11:40 PM) 
beautiful collab....you worked well together....nicely penned

  AR-15
09/05/09 (07:28 PM) 
Jealous one always hate to see the strength of a bond in love grow ... mainly because they want it themselves.. but it hasn't happened to them yet....very nicely written

  angeleyes1
09/05/09 (10:42 AM) 
very beautifully written I love this you both did ya thing keep them coming much love

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