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"The Morning After"
  by mmd2888
  - This Poem is a response to the poem poetic lay by me-me


This morning I still remember
I still feel it
I can still taste it
The way you crept back into my mind
The way your words eased back down my spine
I can still hear you rhyming
leaving traces of ur poetic passion
laying all over me
Ur flow flowed ever so effortlessly
As if u had never left us
waiting so patiently
This morning I want more
I need more
Ready to soar
Ready to explode once more
Can I have ur poetic fantasies like before?
You have my pen tore
You have my pad sore
I lay here in bliss
Infatuated by these words I've missed
I need ur next poetic lay
Like I need night mixed with day
Like I need ur pen mixed with me
I need ur pen for my smiles, my tears and my laughter
Lets do this again, soon, how bout the morning after?
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Date Submitted: Apr 21, 2009 (12:32 AM)
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  asia-monay
09/19/09 (03:07 PM) 
i really enjoyed this makes me miss the days where innocence was love

  Dutchmisses
08/18/09 (08:17 PM) 
wooooow that was deep hot n sexi n a whole lotta other shit! you did your thing n this was one of the best responses i have ever read to a poem its favored no doubt lol

  me-me
04/23/09 (10:20 PM) 
damn and thats truly wassup i love the way you take others words and add your passion it makes for a hellified orgasm....oohhh im sorry i meant hellafied read keep blazen that pen cuz im damn sure gonna keep reading every time i read something that you responded to from me i smile the entire time im reading them its like your there with me like im holding a private conversation with you and only you i mean it amazes me how you dont miss a beat but then thats what great writers do and you my frie...
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