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"The Mountain"
  by getchamndrite


Emotions turn
Distaste dissolves leaving my mouth dry
And tired
Yet I am willing
Assurance and reassurance needed
Labeling the needy
Clinging
Dangling
Thrown the rope
Easing the mind
And we take turns
Swinging below the cliff’s edge
Reveling in being the savior
Milking our martyrdom
And when the tears fall…
Nothing even matters
The earth’s rotation stops
Although nothing is resolved
The relationship wavering on de-magnetization
The wound is unwrapped for both parties to see
Tones change
Looks peer deeper
Care is shone
Some things are more important than the mountain
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (05:02 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  big josh
10/09/09 (12:38 PM) 
wow. this was a pretty good piece, I like it

  Syndel
07/04/09 (05:42 PM) 
yes this is a deep meaningful write cause it has so many endings it can take leaves you to place the ending on your own

  drybaggij
07/04/09 (05:12 PM) 
sounds like making moutain out of mole hills. some things more important than the mountain indeed.

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