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"The night was hers (I made her a woman)"
  by LadyMay16


Told me she was curious?
Been in love
Yet never really been loved
So I held her with tender hands
Allowing her to at least feel it
Nervous antics begin as we touch
Discovering places unknown
Yet allowing the pleasure to take over us
Delving deeper into crevices
Seeking peaks wit tips and lips
Showering kisses on fingertips
After they touch spots
That’s hot
And wett
Making body feel good
As I pull back hood
Of clitoral skin
Flickering tongue
Like rattle snake
As body shake and thick thighs jiggle
As I wiggle my finger in her middle
Making her melt
On pillow top mattress
Eyes closed as she discovers
That a girl lover
Can make it do what it do!
Lips tremble
As they form words of ecstasy
Ohhhhh’s
And
Ahhhhh’s
Escape parted mouth
As they get covered with kisses
Humming love tunes
As she croons out and shouts…………….
“Tonight you made me a woman”
And it felt real goooooooooood

Tonight Is The Night - Betty Wright
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Date Submitted: Mar 04, 2009 (03:24 PM)
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  Jody
03/28/09 (04:56 PM) 
word? lol... well sounds like you guys had a fun night.... making women... lol...

  BlessedOne
03/13/09 (05:25 PM) 
Well, I hear ya Miss Lady. This was very descriptive. I have to laugh at Mavrick. lol

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
03/04/09 (07:43 PM) 
definitely feeling this...got some lovely images in my mind conjured by this lovely writing....please do it again so i can peep your skills....like Mavrick....good game ladies....lol

  .Always.Catali...
03/04/09 (03:58 PM) 
smdh...and singing the song as I leave with my eyes covered...

  MAVRICK
03/04/09 (03:41 PM) 
Okay...what does a man say to this?...Uhhhh Good Game!? **Smacks Both Players On The Ass!**...haha...

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