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"The One"
  by Remedy




Is it the distance from your mind to the
deepest sand pits in the world
that I would ever discover the misery
that part of life has devoured me.

Shaken by the fears that one left behind that
I have devoted and dedicated my life
to only one true feeling and belief that
I have discovered when I was just 12.

“It’s God the everlasting and the light”

When you have discovered he who
Make’s you whole.
An enlighten sentiment of passion has
Elevated you into a higher existence.
Peace and prosperity is now at your fingertips.

Instead of your ripened life it
Has been washed away.
Which renewed you to completeness
Then your mind know what your heart wants
In return.
Not the physical reactions of your self-being.
Instead of your own image of your identity
Mentally just a figure…

Try or try not to consume your true character
But find the one who breathe spirit into you
And when you wake up
You would know he had woken you up…
And you know he will never devour you

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Date Submitted: Nov 01, 2007 (07:54 PM)
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  precious225
11/07/09 (01:42 AM) 
DAMN THIS IR REALLY GOOD

  2Smoove
04/03/08 (09:56 PM) 
this is way too good!!! yo yo yo i dont read poems of this content alot on here so you get a fave from wit this one nice work!!!

  b3yond r3d3mpt...
04/02/08 (09:21 PM) 
blown away from the first stanza lil ma and you keep delivering this powerful flow you got some wordz on ya homie and you got some talent on ya imagery sceme keep these flows up tens around da room from yo boy

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
04/02/08 (08:10 PM) 
truth spoken from wisdom. this was like a breath of fresh aire. something that i most certainly needed to read for my spirit has been troubled. thank you for sharing this magnificent piece of art work............

  baby wiggles
11/01/07 (07:56 PM) 
dat waz aiight but keep ya pen movin

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