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"The Pain In Me"
  by UnIqE_DiVa



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Living like this everyday is bullshit,

No privacy no space I cant even think straight,

It doesn't seem to bother anyone but me,

But i guess that's because Im the only one who can see,

That there is a better life for me another place to be,

A higher purpose and a deeper destiny,

you feeling me!!!!!!!!!

It seems nobody can relate to me,

Nobody knows how it feels to be in the same place as me,

I think you people got it twisted,

Im not looking for sympathy,

Its plain to see,

I need somebody that will care for me be there for me,

You see this shit is scaring me,

Its weird to me,

How someone can claim to love you but the love you never see explain to me,

Its changing me,

I look in the mirror and not know the person that looks the same as me,

The pain you see it angers me,

It forces me to live my life dangerously,

Im just trying to be the person that i claim to be,

So that i can be the person that i aim to be,

The pain in me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date Submitted: Jul 10, 2009 (06:29 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/20/09 (09:26 AM)
Author: G.A.
Poem Title: 1993-THE PAIN IN ME

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comment icon  COMMENTS (28)
  HOLLYWOOD77
08/21/09 (01:20 AM) 
DAMN I LIKE DIS ITS REAL LIFE 1000

  G.A.
08/20/09 (09:16 AM) 
first thing came to me is..... i felt this exact pain before in my lifetime n it brought up that memory in my life once more i felt the emotion in this n it was truley somethin ... nice right

  jhalilz
08/09/09 (11:46 PM) 
dis rite here got dat kinda magic flow to it. like an inspiration rap. love it. deserves100 but i can onli give it 10 strz

  22sunflower
08/03/09 (09:51 PM) 
i loved it from start to finish 10strz and fav

  Instrumental
08/02/09 (11:58 PM) 
You capture the emotions very well. I bet you can go back to feelings and write solely off that.

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