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" The Perfect Love"
A Artgirl567 and Serious Q Collaboration


  Serious Q:

I can't help missing you every moment we're apart,
you hold the only key that unlocks my needing heart.
The happiness and feelings that I feel when I'm in your arms cannot be described.
They cannot be put into words, or even pictures.
They cannot be seen and they cannot be heard.
Only felt when in the perfect place with the perfect person.
I never imagined that love could feel this amazing.
That it would warm my heart even when surrounded by the hottest air.
I never thought that looking into someone's eyes could make my heart flutter.
Make me feel like there is no gravity around me.
Like I am invincible and nothing could ever harm me.
When in your arms these are the feelings that my heart and soul feel.
Feelings so powerful that I'm so scared to be hurt.
Scared to lose these extraordinary feelings that make me feel the way I do.
However without pain there would be no love.
If we felt no pain then we would never miss those close.
Never miss those who just mean all so much.
It would never faze us to see those who are close to us cry.
We would never need anyone to talk to or comfort us.
We would never have any questions to ask or problems to solve.
If there was none of this, then what would life be.
Life would cease to exist without this love and pain that we see.
As my life would cease to exist without you here beside me.

  Artgirl567:

Ha look at me
I never thought this i would be
Me falling in love
This i thought would never see
So deep in love
Studying none of the nigg trying to holla at me
The way i feel for you
Its undescribile
Its not just one syllable
Making me feel as if the worlds problem free
In your arms maing me feel liking a golden charm
Never wanting to be without you
Never thinking i could miss sometime so much
When we are part
My world turns up upside down
Not my other half,cuz thats not something i believe
Cuz i am me
Me being whole already
Complete
But you
You better me!!!
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Date Submitted: Jul 02, 2007 (01:24 PM)
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  Royalty
07/03/07 (03:42 PM) 
VERY NICE POEM AND WELL WRITTEN IM FEELIN THE COLLAB SO 10 STARZZ ITS A FAV...

  STREET
07/03/07 (05:02 AM) 
damm mammii keep that killa shit up so nice i feel u and how deep u go in yo poems and shit wen we getting a colab u dig holla 1

  C-note ron
07/02/07 (07:59 PM) 
this is high rollin poetry it's truly one duo hall of fame

  peanut lol(bur...
07/02/07 (07:27 PM) 
damn dat waz hot...diz iz a fav and 10 starz

  Hat3Cryin
07/02/07 (05:54 PM) 
i like this....i made it one of my favorites

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