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"The plot"
  by trinabeana


I've wrapped my thoughts around the ignorant gesures that you've tried to fetch to me in your many lessons,
My head is bangin thinking about I deserving better.
I try to plot on how to get out of this position.
This position of basically getting taught to not care for not another man because of the petty beats you drummed upon me,
Your kicks that you instilled frequently to my ass...
Wounds you open with a kick here...
a punch there...
Oh, and let me not forget the word "cunt"
I plot on how to be release from this position...
Here I go,
I take a little dro, roll it up in a regular swisher, grab a bottle of hen, then a skittle...
ok
Now lets see if this works...
well,
my mind has left the building but I forgot to retrieve my body...
Go back to get it but,
Damn, its to late...
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Date Submitted: Apr 12, 2008 (11:16 PM)
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  A.C.H.
08/14/08 (10:57 PM) 
This was so very deep! I am definitely feeling this. Keep doing your thing! - "the inspired one"

  touchdapearl2
04/26/08 (12:51 PM) 
wow you know how you neva get the message til you read it for urself,this piece is deep and short.good write

  Jody
04/13/08 (01:36 PM) 
wow, what an ending! I presume she's dead. what's a skittle? Being caught in an abusive relationhip, trying to free herself and to me she ended up doing so in death but it doesn't seem like that was her original "plot" to die...

  heaviness
04/13/08 (01:14 PM) 
my national anthem my mind has left the building but I forgot to retrieve my body... Go back to get it but, Damn, its to late... been there done that been there doing that

  INSPIRED 2 B
04/13/08 (12:58 PM) 
I LIKE THIS POEM. DIDNT REALLY UNDERSTAND THE ENDING AT FIRST BUT I THINK I GOT IT. IT WAS GOOD. LIKE THE WAY YOU WRITE

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