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"The Point of No Return"
A b3yond r3d3mption/(Arch Angel) and AR-15 Collaboration


  AR-15:

Welcome to the point of no return
Where impossible happens, ice can even burn
Animals talk, snakes can even walk
In an upright position, evil souls get a taste of divine and intervention
Capture the moments on a Kodak camera
Mugshots of misfortune get all the glitz and glamor
Fate is determined and it's fair and unbiased
So that means, justice can finally be served
And the guilty get the verdicts they deserve
Because the jury can see them,as they biting on their words
People are too timid, spending time having fears about dying
I rather see more Christians have fears about lying
Because death is coming, a notion that's undying
And people at funerals need to stop crying
If the person that was inside the casket, was alive
They would slap sense into people, wiping tears out their eyes
Saying, one day we'll all be at the point of no return
Where, the devil himself cannot let a soul burn



  b3yond r3d3mption/(Arch Angel):

no exit at the point of no return...so dont question
exits blocked by possesion of a blessed pen
when the dead wake and the live are resting..how depressing...
stuck in this futuristic convention of oppression
no protection..poetic correction..expression
where the poor get a break and the rich get taugh a lesson
im confessing..a confession..of profession..
connecting thoughts like the chinese connection...if ur guessing
im electing a poetic mastermind...ar..scare the devils
we the revial rebels...we wont settle..with no medals
ripped from the tree of life..we grow back as the pedals
this the point of no return..no hanzels or gretels

  AR-15:

No folk tales or fables, horses with no stables
We tired of being just another maligned label
Or being black men trying to fix white man's cable
Life is not television, real struggles, like Cain vs. Abel
Like B.R. said, people please don't settle
We need more Michael Phelps's, reaching for a dozen gold medals
In the Olympics of life, running full speed
Where the grand prize at the end will not bring any fame or greed
Respect the context of the content, any questions?
If not, Warning, no repercussions so here's some suggestions
Before anyone attempts to travel to the point of no return
Cleanse your thoughts real well, because lessons will be learned


  b3yond r3d3mption/(Arch Angel):

lessons learned as the tables turn
no soul burn but the flames are heard
no scars but the wombs are cured
as BR an AR mature...
whats legends to an amatuer...were expanding words
no fear becuz thier visions blurred..so their aim is curved..
not hitting just shotting slurs..
we lunar..so they gotta better chance shooting birds
just recuriting...a solution..we needa new poetic constitution
some say a revoloution...i kinda find it amusing
this the point of no return...there is no escape
trapped in a room filled with confusion and hate...........
Hero (Instrumental) - Nas
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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (01:30 PM)
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  Shaboogie
08/16/08 (06:15 PM) 
ya'll did kill this i have to give it to u both on this one. Poetic masterminds? maybe in the near future your skills r definitely improving b.r. i must say. Keep writing i love when poets develop their skils and branch out. the key to a good collabo is synching kinda like an ipod and u 2 did just that with this.

  touchdapearl2
08/16/08 (04:35 PM) 
this was..........damn where ice can even burn...that along was a hot line matter of fact on fire! you to did yall thing on this piece I read it twice just to make sure i wasnt missing a beat,well damn

  L.edwards
08/16/08 (04:15 PM) 
damn yall both killed every line and made this write speak love it 10 stars all day long

  DOMINICANPOET
08/16/08 (01:34 PM) 
Wow this collab was wow....Im so speechless..The chemistry was so raw keep em coming the both of you ten....

  b3yond r3d3mpt...
08/16/08 (01:32 PM) 
damn bruh we really did it on this one we came hard aha glad to see we got 2 collabs now

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