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"The Power (Soul City RLs secret Challenge)"
  by LyricalDiva


Some secrets reveal
The deepest desires of our hearts
Some secrets for tale innocent
Kisses stolen on playgrounds
From grade school
Some secrets can deny
All the truths we hold
In our hearts
Some secrets can fulfill
And hold dreams fast
Hard in our grasp

But there are secrets that can kill
Secrets that will blow a family apart
Destroy the very understandings
Of a persons sanity
Destroy your loving perception
of a parents character
Keeping little girls
To hide grown mans shame
Locked in the dark
Some secrets will be the talk
Gracious gatherings
Of great grandeurs Grandparent Gossip
And Elderly Relatives speculations
And inaccurate interpretations
That would be gleefully taken
To their graves.
And have no long after regrets
Secrets have the power
To move or destroy mountains
Over come or smother rich relations
Bring together or divide a nation
Keep a father away from his creation
Making mini teenagers into mothers
Before their age of awakening
Secrets are were TalkShows
were birth from

So let’s cut the therotical bullshit
Asking me how I would feel
Because contemplating homicide
Is just plain ridiculous
And WELLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
And if I told you mine
Id would just have to kill you!!!!!
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Date Submitted: Oct 16, 2009 (12:01 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 10/16/09 (01:40 PM)
Author: stranger
Poem Title: Deathmask ? [PWAG r...

Date: 10/16/09 (12:02 PM)
Author: Group: Soul City
Poem Title: The Power (Soul City...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (13)
  Flowet
11/04/09 (10:13 AM) 
ok some secrets can kill and i hope i never unravel any of them that do good poem i sorta created my own message out of it i don't know if we had the same thing in mind or not they say great minds think alike but i say creative minds think in abstract anywho i liked the poem good jolly laugh from reading the end and a deep understanding from reading every stanza before hand keep up the pen and i'll be back for more

  AR-15
11/04/09 (01:00 AM) 
The power of a secret is always undermined... and it shouldn't.. What a strong choice of words as well.. Articulate but soulful in the same approach.. another favorite indeed

  Shye201
11/04/09 (12:26 AM) 
Very powerful and oh so true....u have a unique style

  Blayzn 10
10/19/09 (03:08 PM) 
WOW, crazy last line. Secrets will kill... and if youre holding a deep enough secret, it will eat you up and deteriorate who you really are!! Nice flow ma!!

  piss a mofo of...
10/18/09 (04:05 PM) 
whewwww!!! \'secrets\' and can hold all of the things you\'ve elaborated on and then some and you never know how \'your\' secret will affect people...Pure Poetic scribe here!!

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