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"THE PUPPET THINKS HE IS A REAL BOY..."
  by Untouched_Soul


CURTAINS OPENED...

Brainwashed by society
He now thinks that he is free
Even though he isn’t who he wants to be
He conforms to the norm
One MUST work to live...
Money is the rod by which he measures himself
Against the rest
Even though he tries to convince himself
That he is not like them
The fancy houses and glamorous rides
Aren’t for him
Yet in the back of his mind
He wishes he wouldn’t be disappointed
When he dips into his pockets
To find the next pay check can’t come soon enough

I observe them all through my own invisible walls
As we all
Go about our daily routine
Unaware of the strings attached to us
We don’t see them subconsciously tugging on our mind’s strings

What size should he be?
Who should she marry?
Do I follow the religion I was born into?
Or do I dare to want learn about the fulfilment another can offer me
Does being black mean that I will always fight for my rights
Am I automatically racist because I am white?
Should I dress how I feel comfortable?
Or do I go with what’s in style?
Do I love him because he is what my parents expect?
Or does he love me because it’s worthwhile?

Dance puppet dance!
To the melody of your money
Filling his pockets
When you gamble it away
Because on the next roll you think you could win
But you lose everything
And then you have to face her... broken

Dance puppet dance!
To the beat of grade point averages
And Ivy League colleges
That you can’t get into
Because you aren’t cut from that cloth
You are ultimately striving for excellence
But the committee members see you as a nought

Dance puppet dance
Fight for your country!
Defend the soil that feeds you
Only to be welcomed home
To face the drought
Of recognition
An unsuitable pension
Physically injured and mentally tired
Tugging at demons wishing your life had expired
Instead of your time
In a place where your dreams
Forgot your hopes
And you danced for everyone but yourself

Dance puppet dance!
To the words of the song called failure
The ones that play in your head
Because your father is an addict
Your mother’s dead
You were abused
So you have everything to lose
Are the strings tighter when you don’t have to be a fighter?
When the world as at your feet for the taking
Yet still you don’t use your resources wisely
Fulfilling serial killers tendencies
Staging promiscuous fantasies
Indulging in paedophile activities
Blaming your actions on ADD or some other deficiency

But you are still free
Or are you really?
Emancipated from the stench or minority
Released from the bondage of poverty
Or is it just a well decorated illusion?
A magic show where you are the contestant
Or maybe just a musical
Where you’re the puppet who is so popular
That you think you’re a real boy
But while attempting to walk off the stage
You realise they are folding you up
Detaching your strings and placing you inside the box...

CURTAINS CLOSED

UNTOUCHEDSOUL2009

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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2009 (06:49 PM)
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11/18/09 (10:56 PM) 
hmmmm....From the bottom of my being...thank u 4 this...as soon as the curtains opened i felt u were peeking into the kept of my depths...and as i read on it just intensified the feeling the point if well noted as it's true but we act like we can't see it..nor feel it....i have missed ur pen..maybe i should stop punishing myself by not visiting more...i feel honored 2 be able 2 say I'm favored by such a talented Queen...who speaks blunt truths spun in such a unqiue way...u kno i always loved ur ...
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  Indispensable&...
11/11/09 (04:28 PM) 
WOW WOW WOW.... I haven't been on ya page in a while hun... GREAT SCRIB.... DANG girl... I wish I had your pen marks.. your words speak volumes.... you did a superior job on this one... Much luv... Indispensable♥Soul

  Chaotic Virgo
10/21/09 (09:49 AM) 
Nice piece I really enjoyed the metaphorical dance you displayed here... reality being so much different than we were led to believe... how much do any of us really know given our limited view of lifes ultimate tapestry.

  BlessedOne
09/26/09 (03:18 PM) 
Bravo! Bravo! You really gave a lot to ponder in this piece. I think that we should be encouraged to find out who we as individuals are and to break out of the machine, or as you have demonstrated - cut the puppet strings. I think that more will be discovered from reading this again. Thanks for sharing it.

  Tonya
09/24/09 (06:53 PM) 
I HAVE ALWAYS WONDERED ABOT THIS SO CALLED "FREEDOM"...INSIGHTFUL SRIBE POETESS...WRODS ARE WISDOM. THANK YOU FOR THESE

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