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"The Right Way"
  by Heavenz_Finest


Learn how to talk about,
a woman's mind, body, and soul,
not about her ass and tits,
or how she makes her back roll.

Love her for who she is,
how she laughs and how she smiles,
not for what she wears or,
even how she walks that mile.

Tell her you love her,
and she makes your day,
don't give her that look,
and holla at her saying "ey."

Tell her she's beautiful,
and she always looks good,
even if she's bitching and screaming,
saying she's not in the mood.

This is for the fellas,
Listen to what I say,
learn how to treat a woman,
the right way.
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Date Submitted: Oct 07, 2008 (02:04 PM)
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  DeepThinker7
01/07/09 (03:30 AM) 
We could all stand to be both teacher and student to each other. Thanks for the continuous 'teaching moment.' Check out the scribe 'Master and Slave'... welcome your thoughts Keep moving your mental ink forward!

  African Queen
11/20/08 (02:32 AM) 
more fellas should come through here and read this piece...give them a few pointers on how to treat and keep a lady happy...nice work again

  Dana Dane... M...
11/18/08 (09:54 AM) 
Diva u betta speak! U almost had me testifying over here! I couldnt agree more with your words!

  StraY12
11/17/08 (06:04 PM) 
This was some nice advice for most guys, I thought you did purdy good explainin' what ticks you off, LoL other then that this was a nice write

  williesidney
10/27/08 (04:01 PM) 
Lady you are good at waht you do you do have a gift from God always use that to bless others a big ten stars.

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