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"the shame benneath the veil"
  by poetic rymes


As she shook her hips to the bass line.
As she began to slow wine.
No one ever saw her face
Because she wore a veil to hide her disgrace.
The veil hid all her shame,
The men that watched her thought it was a game.
But for her it was real
No one could ever understand how she feels.
One look into her eyes
Will have you mesmerized.
Many men have tried,
But she never gave them the time of day.
Sister had dreams and nothing was gone get in her way.
The way she shook her body would have you in a daze.
Trying to figure out who she was would put you in a maze.
Taking you on a high it was no joke,
Had you feeling like you was sniffing coke.
This is her story
The shame beneath the veil
That is the name of her tale.
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Date Submitted: Feb 16, 2007 (01:09 AM)
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  Chinazy
10/31/09 (07:51 PM) 
i cld relate to this poem. nice piece

  Shani. Medicin...
01/11/09 (10:04 PM) 
the title caught my attention, and it flows very well, keeps me hooked, but i'm left wondering what her shame was...i guess that is the intent so u pulled it off very nicely. good read.

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
08/18/08 (10:34 PM) 
great poem.seems like she trying to make it but knowing who she is would cause her more pain

  *!DymeDuchess!...
12/01/07 (11:59 AM) 
well written its a real one

  Syndel
08/22/07 (11:20 AM) 
again such passion and thought put into this write love the flow and the message living but not wanting to be seen love this story and you told it with such passion lovin this very much flavorlishas = bravo

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