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"The Situation pt.2"
  by Mints


As the relationship slowly diminishes

He realizes that she is no longer interested

As much as he wants 2 stay n b wit her

He decides 2 let her go

He asked her if that otha nigga is tha reason 4 all of this

She replies that he isnt tha reason 4 tha ending of their relationship

He doesnt believe it but looks @ it as whuteva

Cuz he knows that there is a young lady out there who can n will treat him betta

He tried 2 tell her about tha otha dude n let her kno whut he's trully about

But she didn't believe him n ignored everything that came outta his mouth

So, he decides 2 not speak n jus leave her alone

He figures wit his life he should jus move on

Altho tha hurt wuz in his heart

He knew they needed 2 go their seperate ways

So she could grow up n mature 1 day

A couple of months came n went by

They finally crossed paths n spoke 4 tha 1st time

About their seperate n very different lifes

He tells her of a great young lady he has n she tells him of that lying guy

By tha end of tha conversation, she had tears fallin 4rm her eyes....

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My homeboy finally dropped part two there is one more part left in the series stay tuned and tell him how you like it iight
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Date Submitted: Jun 28, 2007 (07:32 PM)
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  POOHBEARD
07/20/07 (04:51 PM) 
O YA I DID READ THIS 1 BT IMA COMMENT AGAIN SHOOT CUZ THIS WUZ THE ISH N SHOUT OUT 2 YA HOMEBOY HE DID HIZ THING!

  lilomelio
07/02/07 (07:32 PM) 
u did the damn thing on dis one 10 babes

  Friendly Frien...
06/30/07 (04:57 PM) 
LOVE IT....BUT ITS ABOUT TIME THE DUDE GETS HURT INSTEAD OF THE GIRL

  Lush21
06/30/07 (03:57 PM) 
This is life all the way and its like this sometimes. Now its funny because Karma got her ass. Good write tho. Cant wait for part 3 to drop. 10 stars

  Zanta
06/30/07 (03:22 PM) 
i mean part three

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